As promised, here is Emily's edited and improved story, The Mystery. I am sure she would love your comments and constructive feedback on it but otherwise enjoy! The Mystery Suddenly, the silence was shattered by a loud scream! What was that? I leaped back as fast as I could and that’s when I heard a high-pitch shriek. I didn’t know what to do , I was panicking whilst breathing deeply. Shaking with fear I hid behind a big tree - that was twice the size of me- waiting cautiously to see if I heard that noise again. And I did but only once. I gasped because it sounded like a young girl. What is happening? Why is a girl screaming? Or was this even a girl? I’m meant to be at a school trip in the country. As it was quite boring , I ran off into the deep, dark woods . That’s how I got here . I put on foot on the entrance to the cave then all of a sudden, the weather changed dramatically. I flung my foot off and looked with fear on my face . It was get...